Character Story Revised

Hops is hopping along the prarie floor looking for something to eat. He comes to a bush, while looking through the bush for some berries to eat he spots the most beautiful flower he has ever seen. He bypasses the bush and goes over to the flower. He bends down to smell the flower and a gust of wind blows the flower and the flower lightly grazes Hops lips. Hops thinks the beautiful flower has kissed him and he hugs it believing he has finally found love. Hops hugs the flower to hard and accidently yanks up pulling the flower out of the ground. Hops realizes what he has done and frantically looks around for a water source. He spots the river across the prarie and head in that direction. As he is frantically going towards the river he doesnt see a rock and trips. The flower flies out of his hands. He gets up and grabs the flower and finally gets to the river and reluctantly has to let the flower go or else it is going to die. You see a tear fall down Hops face but a slight smile appears, as he puts the flower in the river and it travels down stream.